Friday, 30 October 2009

That'll Teach'EM

Today,I have just watched a series about boarding school in 1950s.The students learn a lot of things at school.I see both advantages and disadvantages in this series.

The positive thing is students have a good behavior in their life.They know how to live with other people very well.They also can keep an attention in the lesson,It helps them understand those subject as much as they can.

The negative thing is the teachers always shout in the class.It make students feel depressed and frightened.The disciplines are very strict as well. The students could not use their life on their own.

Finally, The students really feel enjoy about life in school.They have a lot of experience from this school.I think the students should go to this school.It is very useful for children.

1 comment:

  1. I like the way you structured your text, Max. Well done...

    Correct the following:

    aboding school = boarding school
    draw an attention = keep an attention
    It give them understand = it helps them understand
    in their own. = on their own
    The students really feel enjoy about life in school = need rephrasing

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